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作者[問題] 請問類似的英文要怎麼說/寫呢

標題moneyred (..)

時間2007-11-22 22:21:00 UTC

因為客人一直不開信用狀造成工廠生產線上延宕多時
我必須寫嚴格一點的信給客人可是我怕表達不太夠請各位高手指點一下

1. 請盡快回覆開信用狀的時間點以便我司安排出貨
Would you help to confirm when you will open your L/C so that
we could arrange your shipment.

2. 如果在不開狀的話我們將把您的訂單自生產線上移除
If you didn't open your L/C(或是 If you could not cinfirm your LC situation)
we will pull out your order from our production line.

以上句子如果不對的地方請各位幫我修正一下...
另外開信用狀式open L/C嗎(那還真白話耶)
以及 "從生產線上移除"裡的"移除"英文要怎麼表達呢?

麻煩各位了謝謝!

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作者: hacb (haha) 看板: intltrade
標題: Re: [問題] 請問類似的英文要怎麼說/寫呢
時間: Thu Nov 22 22:41:06 2007

: 因為客人一直不開信用狀造成工廠生產線上延宕多時
: 我必須寫嚴格一點的信給客人可是我怕表達不太夠請各位高手指點一下
: 1. 請盡快回覆開信用狀的時間點以便我司安排出貨
: Would you help to confirm when you will open your L/C so that
: we could arrange your shipment.
: 2. 如果在不開狀的話我們將把您的訂單自生產線上移除
: If you didn't open your L/C(或是 If you could not cinfirm your LC situation)
: we will pull out your order from our production line.
: 以上句子如果不對的地方請各位幫我修正一下...
: 另外開信用狀式open L/C嗎(那還真白話耶)
: 以及 "從生產線上移除"裡的"移除"英文要怎麼表達呢?
: 麻煩各位了謝謝!

這樣如何呢?

1.In order to execute your order no.xxx, please urgently open an L/C for
our convenience to arrange your shipment.

2. As you have not open L/C of this order no.xxx, we hasten yo advise you
that we compelled to cancel the order.

請大家修正~~謝謝

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作者: nancy0527 (快要變宅女了= =") 看板: intltrade
標題: Re: [問題] 請問類似的英文要怎麼說/寫呢
時間: Thu Nov 22 22:52:21 2007

如果是我的話可能會這樣寫~

: 因為客人一直不開信用狀造成工廠生產線上延宕多時
: 我必須寫嚴格一點的信給客人可是我怕表達不太夠請各位高手指點一下
: 1. 請盡快回覆開信用狀的時間點以便我司安排出貨
: Would you help to confirm when you will open your L/C so that
: we could arrange your shipment.

We didn't receive your L/C so far.
Please kindly check if the L/C was issued already?
So that we can arrange shipment without delay.

可能一開始先婉轉的說沒收到L/C，請客人去確認是否已開
也提醒客人交期可能會因為沒收到信用狀而延誤
通常客人聽到"交期延誤"都會滿緊張的

: 2. 如果在不開狀的話我們將把您的訂單自生產線上移除
: If you didn't open your L/C(或是 If you could not cinfirm your LC situation)
: we will pull out your order from our production line.

Please note the production process will be stopped if we can't receive
your L/C by xxx(時間)

或是

As our company's policy,we can only arrange production after receiving your L/C.
Therefore, hope to receive it as earlier as possible.

這種語氣通常是已經催很久，客人還不開，所以語氣會比較強硬一點

: 以上句子如果不對的地方請各位幫我修正一下...
: 另外開信用狀式open L/C嗎(那還真白話耶)

Open or issue 都可以

: 以及 "從生產線上移除"裡的"移除"英文要怎麼表達呢?

用stop或pending等"暫停"的意思應該就可以了~

: 麻煩各位了謝謝!

以上是我個人的見解，希望對你有點幫助~

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作者: Bredy (流光易逝) 看板: intltrade
標題: Re: [問題] 請問類似的英文要怎麼說/寫呢
時間: Sat Dec 8 22:29:08 2007

如果是我的話, 就會寫的比較白, 讓客戶確實的瞭解嚴重性.

1. 請盡快回覆開信用狀的時間點以便我司安排出貨
We will arrange the shipment schedule after you confirm the issue
date for L/C. Could you let we know this information ASAP? Thanks.

2. 如果在不開狀的話我們將把您的訂單自生產線上移除
We won't proceed your order before receive the L/C from you.
Please kindly be advised.

: 因為客人一直不開信用狀造成工廠生產線上延宕多時
: 我必須寫嚴格一點的信給客人可是我怕表達不太夠請各位高手指點一下
: 1. 請盡快回覆開信用狀的時間點以便我司安排出貨
: Would you help to confirm when you will open your L/C so that
: we could arrange your shipment.
: 2. 如果在不開狀的話我們將把您的訂單自生產線上移除
: If you didn't open your L/C(或是 If you could not cinfirm your LC situation)
: we will pull out your order from our production line.
: 以上句子如果不對的地方請各位幫我修正一下...
: 另外開信用狀式open L/C嗎(那還真白話耶)
: 以及 "從生產線上移除"裡的"移除"英文要怎麼表達呢?
: 麻煩各位了謝謝!

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